Loved it Roz!!
You captured the typical resentment a child may feel had having a third party, especially a lover,interfering with her routine with her Dad.
You also nailed the attempt Elena made to gain Jane’s acceptance of her as father’s
new partner..
But what was genius: the whole Sweet & Low caper and Jane’s sense of propriety.
Slipping the white security chips into Elena was classic.
Greatness