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Although very different, I like both endings

Your excellent writing can pull both off, Jay

Ofttimes nothing can be written that can compete with the reader's own imagination. The creator sets the scene and lets the reader do the rest.

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Brian Dickens Barrabee
Brian Dickens Barrabee

Written by Brian Dickens Barrabee

Very much involved with the world and likes nothing better than writing about its absurdities. Award winning author who guarantees a laugh or two a story.

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